Dalton Vampire 9: HELD HOSTAGEEdit
Semenry:- I don't think anyone shud be flamfing this chaptar as it deels with really serias issass. an if you flam den ur showin how man u reely are. so don flame ok??
The old man was cumming on us. I was scared. He was old and smelled of elderlyness. Blaine grabed me and pushed me behind his weighst to protract me. I was crying all sad like. "Darlin don't cry, I want let him hurt you" Blaine tode me. I wrapped my arms around his neck an kissed him all sexah like. Kurt was still lying on the floor. But then he got up. and then he walled over to the elderly old man.
"WART???!1" Blaine shouted, in schok. I ran out in front of the him.
"Kurt what are you doin?" I asked. I still looked amazing.
"YOU THOUGHT I WUZ DED BUT I TRIKKED U" He said. The odl man just smelled and laurfed.
"Why are you doing this?1" Blaine asked but Kurt said nothing and just said "GET HIM SENIOR"
I creamed! There was old man gonna get me boyfriend with his elderlyness. Not if I had anything to say about it. I jumped in the air and spun around, kicking Senior in the face. Senior slammed into me and we both fell against a wall.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" sed Blaine. I rubbed my head.
"OW I SED"
Then Wes and David came over but Blaine grabbed him and slammed him into the door.
"ow" DEY SED. I started to push Senior off of me but he wuz too string.
"GET OFF U FUCKARR!11" It sed. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" He said.
Then the principal of the school started cummin.
"WUT IS GOIN ON HERE?" He asked. BUT I WAS ALREADY DEAD.
OH NO!1 WUT THE FUCK HAPPENED DERE??
- This is the first recorded time a Mary Sue died in her own story. It inspired several emulators, each of them trying to bring their own twist.
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